Re: [Ntp] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ntp-port-randomization-06: (with COMMENT)

Fernando Gont <fernando@gont.com.ar> Fri, 04 June 2021 06:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ntp] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ntp-port-randomization-06: (with COMMENT)
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Hello, Zaheduzzaman,

Thanks so much for your comments! -- In-line...

On 2/6/21 10:13, Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker wrote:
[....]
> I have two observations,
> 
>      *   it says "This issue has been tracked by US-CERT with VU#597821, and has
>      been
>     assigned CVE-2019-11331." Please provide proper reference to the mentioned
>     terminologies and assignment.

Does this look better:

    This issue has been assigned CVE-2019-11331 [VULN-REPORT].


where:

    [VULN-REPORT]
               The MITRE Corporation, "CVE-2019-11331", April 2019,
               <https://cve.mitre.org/cgi-bin/cvename.cgi?name=CVE-
               2019-11331>.

?



>      *   removal of section 5: I don't think implementation status is a bad idea
>      to be included in the memo. If not in a section, may be as appendix.

Typically, these sections are removed (thereś an RFC on the topic). But 
I wouldn't mind myself to e.g. keep the Implementation Status in an 
Appendix.

Thanks!

Regards,
-- 
Fernando Gont
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