Re: [Ntp] Quick review of WGLC for status change for draft‑ietf‑ntp‑update‑registries

"Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com> Mon, 08 August 2022 15:38 UTC

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From: "Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com>
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Subject: Re: [Ntp] Quick review of WGLC for status change for draft‑ietf‑ntp‑update‑registries
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In response to Harlan's feedback and the comment thread, I made some changes in the draft.

As a reminder, I maintain the document at https://github.com/richsalz/draft

This link compares the current editor's copy to the recently published draft: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-ntp-update-registries&url2=https://richsalz.github.io/draft-rsalz-update-registries/draft-ietf-ntp-update-registries.txt