[Ntp] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-ntp-port-randomization-06: (with COMMENT)

[Lars Eggert via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ntp-port-randomization-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

Document references draft-irtf-pearg-numeric-ids-generation-03, but -07 is the
latest available revision.

These URLs in the document can probably be converted to HTTPS:
 * http://leapsecond.com/ntp/NTP_Paper_Sommars_PTTI2017.pdf
 * http://www.cs.bu.edu/~goldbe/papers/NTPattack.pdf