[Ntp] Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 28 June 2021 10:15 UTC

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DISCUSS:
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Thank you for the work put into this document.

Special thanks for Dieter Sibold as the document shepherd write-up includes
text about the WG consensus.

Please find below one blocking DISCUSS point (but really trivial and easy to
address), some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be appreciated),
and some nits.

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

-- Section 13.1 --
As RFC 7317 is imported by the YANG module, it must be a normative reference.


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COMMENT:
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Should the NTP version(s) be mentioned in the abstract ?

-- Section 1 --
The text appears to indicate that the associations can be configured while the
tree diagram indicateds tha associations are read-only. Should the associations
text moved to the section 1.1 (i.e., operational states) ?

-- Section 1.5 --
Using a table for listing references is unusual. Is there a reason why this
form is used ?

-- Section 8 --
Should there be more constraints on "ntp-version" ? I.e., a minimum of 3 ?