[Ntp] Francesca Palombini's Discuss on draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Francesca Palombini via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 30 June 2021 16:15 UTC

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DISCUSS:
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Thank you for the work on this document.

I have a simple-to-solve DISCUSS point, and some non blocking comments.

Francesca


1. -----

        leaf clock-precision {
          type int8;
          units "Hz";

FP: I believe the units should be seconds here.


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COMMENT:
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2. -----

  typedef ntp-date-and-time {
    type union {
      type yang:date-and-time;
      type uint8;
    }
    description
      "Follows the normal date-and-time format when valid value
       exist, otherwise allows for setting special value such as
       zero.";

FP: I'd rather the document avoided the term "normal", which could be just
removed. Also, could a 'reference' be added, pointing to RFC 6991?

3. -----

        "The association was configured or dynamic
         which result in clock synchronization.";

FP: This sentence doesn't parse correctly for me. Is there any text missing? Or
maybe a wrong copy paste?

4. -----

      description
        "Configuration to control access to NTP service
         by using NTP access-group feature.
         The access-mode identifies how the acl is
         applied with NTP.";

FP: (here and other places) please make sure the capitalization of ACL is
consistent in the descriptions and in the text of the doc.