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Re: [Ntp] Please move draft-ietf-ntp-update-registries forward

"Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com> Thu, 18 August 2022 14:54 UTC

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From: "Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com>
To: Sanjeev Gupta <ghane0@gmail.com>
CC: "ntp-chairs@ietf.org" <ntp-chairs@ietf.org>, "ntp@ietf.org" <ntp@ietf.org>
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These changes looks fine to me. As they are strictly editorial, we can make them during AD, IESG, IETF-LC, or AUTH48 review :)

Thank you!

From: Sanjeev Gupta <ghane0@gmail.com>
Date: Thursday, August 18, 2022 at 9:14 AM
To: Rich Salz <rsalz@akamai.com>
Cc: "ntp-chairs@ietf.org" <ntp-chairs@ietf.org>, "ntp@ietf.org" <ntp@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Ntp] Please move draft-ietf-ntp-update-registries forward

Hi,

I have some textual comments.


1. Swap Registry and Entry definition. Registries consist of Entries. Registries reserve partitions for Private use, etc

-- Every entry reserves a partition for Private or Experimentatal Use.
+- Every registry reserves a partition for Private or Experimentatal Use.

-- Registries with ASCII fields are now limited to uppercase letters; fields
+- Entries with ASCII fields are now limited to uppercase letters; fields


2. All other changes are imperative, "added", "changed", change this to match the tone.

-The following two Notes are added:
+The following two Notes should be added:


Also, one typo, Experimentatal.

I have sent a PR.

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Sanjeev Gupta
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On Thu, 18 Aug 2022 at 04:47, Salz, Rich <rsalz=40akamai.com@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:40akamai.com@dmarc.ietf.org>> wrote:
Chairs,

This version has the changes that I posted about at [1]. I changed the subject line (it was "Quick review of WGLC for status change for draft-ietf-ntp-update-registries") to avoid getting buried in the mega-thread.

Thanks.
        /r$

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ntp/swcTFo8r2tw9swke_ZB5vx7RElE/<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ntp/swcTFo8r2tw9swke_ZB5vx7RElE/__;!!GjvTz_vk!ST1gTMoPZJAljqyaFq443G9kIfYOtcWA8cSJCheB4QgKwgDF38PTHAnfGFugVrA_07mMT85Vhy8$>


On 8/17/22, 4:31 PM, "internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>" <internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>> wrote:


    A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
    This draft is a work item of the Network Time Protocols WG of the IETF.

            Title           : Updating the NTP Registries
            Author          : Rich Salz
      Filename        : draft-ietf-ntp-update-registries-06.txt
      Pages           : 10
      Date            : 2022-08-17

    Abstract:
       The Network Time Protocol (NTP) and Network Time Security (NTS)
       documents define a number of assigned number registries, collectively
       called the NTP registries.  Some registries have wrong values, some
       registries do not follow current common practice, and some are just
       right.  For the sake of completeness, this document reviews all NTP
       and NTS registries.

       This document updates RFC 5905, RFC 5906, RFC 8573, RFC 7822, and RFC
       7821.

    The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ntp-update-registries<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ntp-update-registries__;!!GjvTz_vk!ST1gTMoPZJAljqyaFq443G9kIfYOtcWA8cSJCheB4QgKwgDF38PTHAnfGFugVrA_07mMmMr2HYE$>

    There is also an HTML version available at:
    https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ntp-update-registries-06.html<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ntp-update-registries-06.html__;!!GjvTz_vk!ST1gTMoPZJAljqyaFq443G9kIfYOtcWA8cSJCheB4QgKwgDF38PTHAnfGFugVrA_07mMB1f9Ol8$>

    A diff from the previous version is available at:
    https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ntp-update-registries-06<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ntp-update-registries-06__;!!GjvTz_vk!ST1gTMoPZJAljqyaFq443G9kIfYOtcWA8cSJCheB4QgKwgDF38PTHAnfGFugVrA_07mMa_DNU7g$>

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