Re: [Ntp] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-15: (with COMMENT)

Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com> Thu, 09 December 2021 17:07 UTC

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From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [Ntp] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-15: (with COMMENT)
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I agree this is much clearer now. Thanks.

BR
Zahed

On 2021-12-09, 18:01, "Dhruv Dhody" <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com<mailto:dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>> wrote:

Hi Zaheduzzaman,

Firstly let me apologize for this very late reply. Secondly thanks for your review. I was finally able to make all the changes.

On Wed, Jun 30, 2021 at 8:53 PM Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-15: No Objection

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Thanks for the efforts on this document.

I support Éric Vyncke's discuss.

I also think adding reference to RFC 1305 in section 5 and section 6 creates a
bit of confusion when this document says it defines YANG model for RFC 5905.
Also it is a fact that RFC 1305 is obsoleted by RFC 5905. So is this yang model
also applicable to NTPv3? if not please mention, if so please mention and
consider removing references to RFC 1305.



Dhruv: Since the YANG model allows the version to be set to 3, it can be used to configure NTPv3. I have added text to make this clearer.

Thanks!
Dhruv

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