Re: [Ntp] Publication has been requested for draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-20

Daniel Lublin <daniel@lublin.se> Wed, 13 November 2019 11:55 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ntp] Publication has been requested for draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-20
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Karen O'Donoghue via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>;, 2019-11-07 07:02:55 (-0800):
> Karen O&#39;Donoghue has requested publication of draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-20 as Proposed Standard on behalf of the NTP working group.
> 
> Please verify the document's state at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp/

As was mentioned on the list in July, section "1.2. Protocol Overview" is
outdated. It says, wrongly:

   with a list of one or more IP addresses to NTP servers for which the cookies

but should say:

   with an address to the NTP server for which the cookies

Or something similar, in singular!

For reference, see "4.1.7. NTPv4 Server Negotiation":

   Its body consists of an ASCII-encoded [ANSI.X3-4.1986] string. The
   contents of the string SHALL be either an IPv4 address in dotted decimal
   notation, an IPv6 address, or a fully qualified domain name (FQDN).