Re: [nvo3] Need your action for a draft that has been circling around IESG review for over 4 years. FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt

Martin Vigoureux <martin.vigoureux@nokia.com> Mon, 14 September 2020 19:44 UTC

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Subject: Re: [nvo3] Need your action for a draft that has been circling around IESG review for over 4 years. FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt
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Linda,

your draft is next in my stack.

-m

Le 2020-09-14 à 16:43, Linda Dunbar a écrit :
> Martin,
> This draft was revised more than 10 times to address comments from 
> TSVART directorate review in addition to multiple revisions to address 
> comments from OPSDIR, RTGDIR reviews , spanning more than 2 years.
> Finally NVO3 Chair Matthew sent the request to you for publication in 
> June, about 3 months ago.
> _https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm/history/_
> Can you please take the actions to move this draft forward?
> Thank you very much.
> Linda Dunbar
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB) <matthew.bocci@nokia.com>
> Sent: Monday, September 14, 2020 3:20 AM
> To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>
> Cc: nvo3@ietf.org; draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: revised to address your suggested grammar errors in the 
> draft. FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt
> Hi Linda
> I requested publication back in June (see 
> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm%2Fhistory%2F&amp;data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7C34d80b3520fb40a08fec08d85886f71c%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637356683996626440&amp;sdata=HzT1d4kNvsg58dNg5aAWYhwIf9U2LBFXt5weexeCuTA%3D&amp;reserved=0).
> The document is with Martin. You should expect a review from him at some 
> point.
> Regards
> Matthew
> 
> On 11/09/2020, 23:48, "Linda Dunbar" <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com 
> <mailto:linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>> wrote:
>      Matthew,
>      Just want to follow up on moving this draft forward. All the issues 
> have been fixed since June 17 for version -16.
>      Can you help us? Or tell us what to do?
>      Linda
>      -----Original Message-----
>      From: Linda Dunbar
>      Sent: Wednesday, June 17, 2020 2:45 PM
>      To: Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB) <matthew.bocci@nokia.com 
> <mailto:matthew.bocci@nokia.com>>
>      Cc: nvo3@ietf.org <mailto:nvo3@ietf.org>; 
> draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm@ietf.org <mailto:draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm@ietf.org>
>      Subject: RE: revised to address your suggested grammar errors in 
> the draft. FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt
>      Matthew,
>      All the idnits issues have been corrected in -16 version
>      Can you please move the draft forward?
>      Thank you very much.
>      Linda Dunbar
>      -----Original Message-----
>      From: Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB) <matthew.bocci@nokia.com 
> <mailto:matthew.bocci@nokia.com>>
>      Sent: Wednesday, June 17, 2020 6:36 AM
>      To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com 
> <mailto:linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>>
>      Cc: nvo3@ietf.org <mailto:nvo3@ietf.org>; 
> draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm@ietf.org <mailto:draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm@ietf.org>
>      Subject: Re: revised to address your suggested grammar errors in 
> the draft. FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt
>      Sorry, one other thing: Please remove the change log section (13).
>      Thanks
>      Matthew
>      On 17/06/2020, 12:33, "Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB)" 
> <matthew.bocci@nokia.com <mailto:matthew.bocci@nokia.com>> wrote:
>          Thanks Linda
>          Please resolve the ID-Nits warnings and errors first:
> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww6.ietf.org%2Ftools%2Fidnits%3Furl%3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Farchive%2Fid%2Fdraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt&amp;data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7C34d80b3520fb40a08fec08d85886f71c%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637356683996626440&amp;sdata=vjTK%2BTwaf7iBWIPfaRMiqEY2Ogu7jfchpAA%2BFLBiL%2B8%3D&amp;reserved=0
>          Best regards
>          Matthew
>          On 16/06/2020, 00:55, "Linda Dunbar" 
> <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com <mailto:linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>> wrote:
>              Matthew,
>              We have uploaded the revised draft to correct all the 
> grammar errors based on  your suggestion for the first 4 sections.
>              Can you please move the draft forward? Otherwise, the 
> Transport AD Magnus Westerlund (who had reviewed the draft) would be 
> finishing his term, and we have to start from ground 0 to re-address the 
> comments from Transport Directorate.
>              Thank you very much,
>              Linda Dunbar
>              -----Original Message-----
>              From: internet-drafts@ietf.org 
> <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> <internet-drafts@ietf.org 
> <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>>
>              Sent: Monday, June 15, 2020 6:48 PM
>              To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com 
> <mailto:linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>>; Behcet Sarikaya <sarikaya@ieee.org 
> <mailto:sarikaya@ieee.org>>; Saumya Dikshit <saumya.dikshit@hpe.com 
> <mailto:saumya.dikshit@hpe.com>>; Tom Herbert <tom@herbertland.com 
> <mailto:tom@herbertland.com>>; Bhumip Khasnabish <vumip1@gmail.com 
> <mailto:vumip1@gmail.com>>
>              Subject: New Version Notification for 
> draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt
>              A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt has been 
> successfully submitted by Linda Dunbar and posted to the IETF repository.
>              Name:               draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm
>              Revision:   15
>              Title:              Virtual Machine Mobility Solutions for 
> L2 and L3 Overlay Networks
>              Document date:      2020-06-15
>              Group:              nvo3
>              Pages:              17
>              URL: 
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>              Abstract:
>                 This document describes virtual machine (VM) mobility 
> solutions
>                 commonly used in data centers built with an overlay 
> network. This
>                 document is intended for describing the solutions and 
> the impact of
>                 moving VMs, or applications, from one rack to another 
> connected by
>                 the overlay network.
>                 For layer 2, it is based on using an NVA (Network 
> Virtualization
>                 Authority) to NVE (Network Virtualization Edge) protocol 
> to update
>                 ARP (Address Resolution Protocol) tables or neighbor 
> cache entries
>                 after a VM moves from an old NVE to a new NVE.  For 
> Layer 3, it is
>                 based on address and connection migration after the move.
>              Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the 
> time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at 
> tools.ietf.org.
>              The IETF Secretariat