Re: [nvo3] draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-00.txt

worley@ariadne.com (Dale R. Worley) Thu, 03 August 2017 02:22 UTC

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Behcet Sarikaya <sarikaya2012@gmail.com> writes:
>>         Title           : Virtual Machine Mobility Protocol for L2 and L3
>> Overlay Networks
>>         Authors         : Behcet Sarikaya
>>                           Linda Dunbar
>>                           Bhumip Khasnabish
>>                           Tom Herbert
>>                           Saumya Dikshit
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-00.txt
>>         Pages           : 13
>>         Date            : 2017-07-17

Very nice!

A small nit:  The term "packets in flight" is used multiple times, but
never fully defined.  I think it would help to add an entry for it into
the terminology section.

Dale