[nvo3] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-04

Himanshu Shah via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 14 June 2022 22:56 UTC

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Reviewer: Himanshu Shah
Review result: Ready

The document is well written and easy to follow.
One suggestion.
Appendix A describes other alternative approaches that were considered for informational purposes.
It would nice to get a closure on that by stating in the last paragraph that

"The options described here in the appendix were discarded in favor of the approach
described in the main document".

Please feel free to word it better.