Re: [nvo3] revised to address your suggested grammar errors in the draft. FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt

["Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB)" <[e-mail]>]

Thanks Linda

Please resolve the ID-Nits warnings and errors first:

https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt

Best regards

Matthew

On 16/06/2020, 00:55, "Linda Dunbar" <[e-mail]> wrote:

    Matthew, 

    We have uploaded the revised draft to correct all the grammar errors based on  your suggestion for the first 4 sections. 

    Can you please move the draft forward? Otherwise, the Transport AD Magnus Westerlund (who had reviewed the draft) would be finishing his term, and we have to start from ground 0 to re-address the comments from Transport Directorate. 


    Thank you very much, 

    Linda Dunbar
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    Name:		draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm
    Revision:	15
    Title:		Virtual Machine Mobility Solutions for L2 and L3 Overlay Networks
    Document date:	2020-06-15
    Group:		nvo3
    Pages:		17
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    Abstract:
       This document describes virtual machine (VM) mobility solutions
       commonly used in data centers built with an overlay network. This
       document is intended for describing the solutions and the impact of
       moving VMs, or applications, from one rack to another connected by
       the overlay network.

       For layer 2, it is based on using an NVA (Network Virtualization
       Authority) to NVE (Network Virtualization Edge) protocol to update
       ARP (Address Resolution Protocol) tables or neighbor cache entries
       after a VM moves from an old NVE to a new NVE.  For Layer 3, it is
       based on address and connection migration after the move.




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