Re: [nvo3] revised to address your suggested grammar errors in the draft. FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt

[Linda Dunbar <[e-mail]>]

Matthew, 

All the idnits issues have been corrected in -16 version

Can you please move the draft forward? 

Thank you very much. 

Linda Dunbar

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Subject: Re: revised to address your suggested grammar errors in the draft. FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt

Sorry, one other thing: Please remove the change log section (13).

Thanks

Matthew


On 17/06/2020, 12:33, "Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB)" <[e-mail]> wrote:

    Thanks Linda

    Please resolve the ID-Nits warnings and errors first:

    https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww6.ietf.org%2Ftools%2Fidnits%3Furl%3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Farchive%2Fid%2Fdraft-ietf-nvo3-vmm-15.txt&amp;data=02%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7Cf82370d79edc47eabc0a08d812b2903c%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637279905428632080&amp;sdata=J%2BwTd6OMD81EDg9ht5qlq2Yicq097adSjE2x8Y%2BkKKo%3D&amp;reserved=0

    Best regards

    Matthew

    On 16/06/2020, 00:55, "Linda Dunbar" <[e-mail]> wrote:

        Matthew, 

        We have uploaded the revised draft to correct all the grammar errors based on  your suggestion for the first 4 sections. 

        Can you please move the draft forward? Otherwise, the Transport AD Magnus Westerlund (who had reviewed the draft) would be finishing his term, and we have to start from ground 0 to re-address the comments from Transport Directorate. 


        Thank you very much, 

        Linda Dunbar
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        Name:		draft-ietf-nvo3-vmm
        Revision:	15
        Title:		Virtual Machine Mobility Solutions for L2 and L3 Overlay Networks
        Document date:	2020-06-15
        Group:		nvo3
        Pages:		17
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        Abstract:
           This document describes virtual machine (VM) mobility solutions
           commonly used in data centers built with an overlay network. This
           document is intended for describing the solutions and the impact of
           moving VMs, or applications, from one rack to another connected by
           the overlay network.

           For layer 2, it is based on using an NVA (Network Virtualization
           Authority) to NVE (Network Virtualization Edge) protocol to update
           ARP (Address Resolution Protocol) tables or neighbor cache entries
           after a VM moves from an old NVE to a new NVE.  For Layer 3, it is
           based on address and connection migration after the move.




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