Re: [nwcrg] [irsg] Mirja Kühlewind's Yes on draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites-13: (with COMMENT)
Mallory Knodel <mknodel@cdt.org> Tue, 05 May 2020 14:03 UTC
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From: Mallory Knodel <mknodel@cdt.org>
Date: Tue, 05 May 2020 10:03:25 -0400
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To: Mirja Kuehlewind <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [nwcrg] [irsg] Mirja Kühlewind's Yes on draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites-13: (with COMMENT)
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Ok, thanks! Very good suggestion on etiquette. -M On Tue, May 5, 2020 at 10:01 AM Mirja Kuehlewind < mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com> wrote: > So there is an option to enter a ballot position without sending the mail. > I would recommend to only generate the mail if you have comments so you can > make sure the authors see this (instead of a review mail you would > otherwise have sent). > > > > Mirja > > > > > > > > *From: *irsg <irsg-bounces@irtf.org> on behalf of Mallory Knodel < > mknodel@cdt.org> > *Date: *Tuesday, 5. May 2020 at 15:49 > *To: *Mirja Kühlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net> > *Cc: *"nwcrg@irtf.org" <nwcrg@irtf.org>, " > draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites@ietf.org" < > draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites@ietf.org>, " > nwcrg-chairs@ietf.org" <nwcrg-chairs@ietf.org>, The IRSG <irsg@irtf.org> > *Subject: *Re: [irsg] Mirja Kühlewind's Yes on > draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites-13: (with COMMENT) > > > > This is cool; but I'm a bit worried that I'll be getting 30 emails of the > sort. > > > > On Tue, May 5, 2020 at 5:17 AM Mirja Kühlewind via Datatracker < > noreply@ietf..org <noreply@ietf.org>> wrote: > > Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for > draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites-13: Yes > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > > https://datatracker.ietf..org/doc/draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites/ > <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites/> > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Comments were already sent by mail; repeating here for the record: > > I reviewed this document and think it is ready to go. > > A few small editorial points: Based on the RFC style guide you cannot have > references in the abstract (meaning just remove the actual reference and > only > write RFC8406). Also I think the abstract could be a bit short and more > crisp. > And while there is an nice and quiet extensive glossary at the end, there > are a > couple of mostly well-know acronyms which might still be worth spelling > out on > first occurrence, given the desired audience: mainly FEC, CPE, RTT, and > DTN.. > And finally the security considerations section is quite short, which is > fine > as. I don’t think there is much to discuss, but maybe there is a good > reference > to give to another NC document that has more discussion about security > implication…? > > > > > > -- > > Mallory Knodel > > CTO, Center for Democracy and Technology > gpg fingerprint :: E3EB 63E0 65A3 B240 BCD9 B071 0C32 A271 BD3C C780 > > > -- Mallory Knodel CTO, Center for Democracy and Technology gpg fingerprint :: E3EB 63E0 65A3 B240 BCD9 B071 0C32 A271 BD3C C780
- [nwcrg] Mirja Kühlewind's Yes on draft-irtf-nwcrg… Mirja Kühlewind via Datatracker
- Re: [nwcrg] [irsg] Mirja Kühlewind's Yes on draft… Mirja Kuehlewind
- Re: [nwcrg] [irsg] Mirja Kühlewind's Yes on draft… Mallory Knodel
- Re: [nwcrg] [irsg] Mirja Kühlewind's Yes on draft… Mallory Knodel