Re: [nwcrg] [irsg] Mirja Kühlewind's Yes on draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites-13: (with COMMENT)

Mallory Knodel <mknodel@cdt.org> Tue, 05 May 2020 13:49 UTC

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From: Mallory Knodel <mknodel@cdt.org>
Date: Tue, 05 May 2020 09:49:25 -0400
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To: Mirja Kühlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net>
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Subject: Re: [nwcrg] [irsg] Mirja Kühlewind's Yes on draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites-13: (with COMMENT)
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This is cool; but I'm a bit worried that I'll be getting 30 emails of the
sort.

On Tue, May 5, 2020 at 5:17 AM Mirja Kühlewind via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites-13: Yes
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> Comments were already sent by mail; repeating here for the record:
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> I reviewed this document and think it is ready to go.
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> A few small editorial points: Based on the RFC style guide you cannot have
> references in the abstract (meaning just remove the actual reference and
> only
> write RFC8406). Also I think the abstract could be a bit short and more
> crisp.
> And while there is an nice and quiet extensive glossary at the end, there
> are a
> couple of mostly well-know acronyms which might still be worth spelling
> out on
> first occurrence, given the desired audience: mainly FEC, CPE, RTT, and
> DTN.
> And finally the security considerations section is quite short, which is
> fine
> as. I don’t think there is much to discuss, but maybe there is a good
> reference
> to give to another NC document that has more discussion about security
> implication…?
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