[nwcrg] my review of draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites-05

"Stuart William Card" <stu.card@critical.com> Thu, 25 July 2019 17:11 UTC

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Subject: [nwcrg] my review of draft-irtf-nwcrg-network-coding-satellites-05
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My review is attached; I apologize for its lateness.

This is the first time I have done this (at least, since the early days of
Mobile IP, and things have changed since then).

Most of my comments are with regard to typographical errors or the like.

The comments marked with "*" are more substantive.

I look forward to seeing many of you tomorrow.

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Stuart W. Card, VP & Chief Scientist
Critical Technologies Inc. (CTI)
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