Re: [oauth-ext-review] Request for parameter name: device_code and 6 others

Hannes Tschofenig <Hannes.Tschofenig@arm.com> Sat, 01 June 2019 06:56 UTC

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Subject: Re: [oauth-ext-review] Request for parameter name: device_code and 6 others
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Hi William,

I reviewed the request for parameters.

The document registers
• One OAuth parameters,
• One OAuth URI,
• several error values, and
• authorization server metadata.

The requested values are OK.

Just one minor nit:

The registry for the authorization server metadata is called “OAuth Authorization Server Metadata”  and the draft calls it “OAuth 2.0 Authorization Server Metadata”. The metadata description could be a bit more detailed by saying that the device_authorization_endpoint metadata is "The URL of the authorization server's device authorization  endpoint" rather than just "The Device Authorization Endpoint."

This is, however, only cosmetic.

Ciao
Hannes



From: William Denniss <wdenniss@google.com>
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Subject: Request for parameter name: device_code and 6 others

Designated Experts,

The OAuth 2.0 Device Authorization Grant draft was approved for publication and is currently in IANA*A state.

We are requesting the registration of 7 OAuth extension values, as documented in section 7 of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-15.

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-15#section-7

Kind regards,
William (on behalf of the authors)

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