[OAUTH-WG] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 03 September 2019 19:34 UTC

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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05: (with COMMENT)
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Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05: No Objection

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-- Section 2 --

   invalid_target
      The requested resource is invalid, unknown, or malformed.

For clarity, I suggest adding "missing" to the list, as specified in Section
2.1, '...and MAY fail requests that omit the parameter with an "invalid_target"
error.'

   The authorization server SHOULD audience restrict issued access
   tokens to the resource(s) indicated by the "resource" parameter.

I can't parse this sentence.  I see "audience" as a verb, and don't understand.
AH.  I read later in the document and figured out my problem: I think it would
help if you hyphenate "audience-restrict" (and "audience-restricted" later). 
No?