Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com> Thu, 29 January 2015 23:16 UTC

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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] PKCE: SHA256(WAT?)
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In §2 [1] we've got "SHA256(STRING) denotes a SHA2 256bit hash [RFC6234] of

But, in the little cow town where I come from anyway, you hash bits/octets
not character strings (BTW, "STRING" isn't defined anywhere but it's kind
of implied that it's a string of characters).

Should it say something more like "SHA256(STRING) denotes a SHA2 256bit
hash [RFC6234] of the octets of the ASCII [RFC0020] representation of

I know it's kind of pedantic but I find it kind of confusing because the
code_verifier uses the url and filename safe alphabet, which has me second
guessing if SHA256(STRING) actually means a hash of the octet produced by
base64url decoding the string.

Maybe it's just me but, when reading the text, I find the transform process
to be much more confusing than I think it needs to be. Removing and
clarifying some things will help. I hate to suggest this but maybe an
example showing the computation steps on both ends would be helpful?

Also "UTF8(STRING)" and "ASCII(STRING)" notations are defined in §2 but not
used anywhere.

And §2 also says, "BASE64URL-DECODE(STRING) denotes the base64url decoding
of STRING, per Section 3, producing a UTF-8 sequence of octets." But what
is a UTF-8 sequence of octets? Isn't it just a sequence octets? The
[RFC3629] reference, I think, could be removed.

[1] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-spop-06#section-2