[OAUTH-WG] draft-ietf-oauth-assertions WGLC comment IV

Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com> Mon, 23 April 2012 17:52 UTC

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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] draft-ietf-oauth-assertions WGLC comment IV
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§4.2* discusses the use of the scope parameter in an authorization grant
request.  This section should probably reference §3.3 of
draft-ietf-oauth-v2** for the formal definition of scope and, subsequently,
a fair amount of text can be removed from the assertions draft.


* http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-assertions-01#section-4.2
** http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-v2-25#section-3.3