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Re: [OAUTH-WG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-access-token-jwt-11

Vittorio Bertocci <vittorio.bertocci@auth0.com> Sat, 20 February 2021 08:42 UTC

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From: Vittorio Bertocci <vittorio.bertocci@auth0.com>
To: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Thank you Roni,
Great catch! I made those two client_id values consistent, the change will appear in 12.
Thanks
V.


On 2/7/21, 01:28, "Roni Even via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

    Reviewer: Roni Even
    Review result: Ready with Nits
    
    I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
    Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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    Document: draft-ietf-oauth-access-token-jwt-??
    Reviewer: Roni Even
    Review Date: 2021-02-07
    IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-09
    IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
    
    Summary:
    The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nit
    
    Major issues:
    
    Minor issues:
    
    Nits/editorial comments:
    In section 3 the get example has client_id as s6BhdRkqt3 and the claims has s6BhdRkqt3_

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