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From: Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com>
Date: Fri, 26 Jul 2019 07:08:45 -0600
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To: Vincent Roca <vincent.roca@inria.fr>
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-15
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Thanks Vincent, I've fixed the nit in the source controlled editor's xml
version and it'll show up in the next draft revision.

On Thu, Jul 25, 2019 at 3:06 PM Vincent Roca via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Vincent Roca
> Review result: Ready
>
> Hello,
>
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate=E2=80=
=99s ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
> directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments ju=
st
> like any other last call comments.
>
> Summary: Ready
>
> The Security considerations and privacy considerations sections both look
> sound
> to me.
>
> Nits:
> * section 7.1: s/to which they where issued/to which they were issued/
>
> Cheers.  Vincent
>
>
>
>

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<div dir=3D"ltr">Thanks Vincent, I&#39;ve fixed the nit in the source contr=
olled editor&#39;s xml version and it&#39;ll show up in the next draft revi=
sion. <br></div><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gm=
ail_attr">On Thu, Jul 25, 2019 at 3:06 PM Vincent Roca via Datatracker &lt;=
<a href=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.org">noreply@ietf.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br></di=
v><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;borde=
r-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Reviewer: Vincent Roca<=
br>
Review result: Ready<br>
<br>
Hello,<br>
<br>
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate=E2=80=99s=
 ongoing<br>
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These<br>
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area<br>
directors.=C2=A0 Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments=
 just<br>
like any other last call comments.<br>
<br>
Summary: Ready<br>
<br>
The Security considerations and privacy considerations sections both look s=
ound <br>
to me. <br>
<br>
Nits: <br>
* section 7.1: s/to which they where issued/to which they were issued/<br>
<br>
Cheers.=C2=A0 Vincent<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
</blockquote></div>

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