[OAUTH-WG] Some minor comments to draft-ietf-oauth-v2-25
Luca Frosini <luca.frosini@isti.cnr.it> Thu, 15 March 2012 17:12 UTC
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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] Some minor comments to draft-ietf-oauth-v2-25
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Hello, I have read the draft of OAuth 2 rev 2.25 for the first time, so some of my comments may be useless. Sorry in advance if some of them have already been discussed and I didn't find it in mailing list archive. I found a grammatical error on page number 6, row 12 'refered' I think should be 'referred'. The document use 'resource owner user-agent' without having introduced it first. I don't know if it is possible to insert it in chapter 1.1, but I think this can be useful for the reader to identify this entity. It also avoids to make confusion regarding what a client is. Regards Luca -- Ing. Luca Frosini Istituto di Scienza e Tecnologie dell'Informazione "A. Faedo" (ISTI) Italian National Research Council (CNR) G. Moruzzi, 1 - 56124 Pisa, Italy Area della Ricerca CNR di Pisa Mob: (+39) 339 7697029 Web-site: http://www.lucafrosini.com Skype: luca.frosini
- [OAUTH-WG] Some minor comments to draft-ietf-oaut… Luca Frosini