Re: [OAUTH-WG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-21.txt

I'd agree that Vladimir's proposed wording is more meaningful/helpful.

On Mon, Apr 20, 2020 at 12:12 AM Vladimir Dzhuvinov <vladimir@connect2id.com>
wrote:

> Nat, John, thanks for updating the JAR spec. I just reviewed it, in
> particular the authz request and the security considerations sections.
> Choosing to make client_id (as top-level parameter) mandatory for all
> cases, even for those when it can be readily extracted from the JWT, makes
> the job of implementers even easier.
>
>
> I have just one comment about the last paragraph in section 5, assuming
> backward compatibility means with RFC6749 requests. Here is my proposed
> wording:
>
> The client MAY send the parameters included in the request object
> duplicated in the query parameters. For instance, this can be done
> to ensure the minimal required query parameters for an OAuth 2.0
> [RFC6749] authorization request are also present. An authorization
> server supporting this specification MUST however only use the
> parameters included in the request object.
>
>
> Vladimir
>
>
> On 19/04/2020 21:30, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Web Authorization Protocol WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework: JWT Secured Authorization Request (JAR)
>         Authors         : Nat Sakimura
>                           John Bradley
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-21.txt
> 	Pages           : 31
> 	Date            : 2020-04-19
>
> Abstract:
>    The authorization request in OAuth 2.0 described in RFC 6749 utilizes
>    query parameter serialization, which means that Authorization Request
>    parameters are encoded in the URI of the request and sent through
>    user agents such as web browsers.  While it is easy to implement, it
>    means that (a) the communication through the user agents are not
>    integrity protected and thus the parameters can be tainted, and (b)
>    the source of the communication is not authenticated.  Because of
>    these weaknesses, several attacks to the protocol have now been put
>    forward.
>
>    This document introduces the ability to send request parameters in a
>    JSON Web Token (JWT) instead, which allows the request to be signed
>    with JSON Web Signature (JWS) and encrypted with JSON Web Encryption
>    (JWE) so that the integrity, source authentication and
>    confidentiality property of the Authorization Request is attained.
>    The request can be sent by value or by reference.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-21https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-21
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-21
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>
>
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