[OAUTH-WG] review draft-ietf-oauth-native-apps-07
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Hi, there is a typo in B.4. Search for "are are" and replace it with "are". Best regards Sebastian -- Sebastian Ebling / sebastian.ebling@telekom.de / +49 6151 5838207 Deutsche Telekom AG, Technology Enabling Platforms (PI-TEP)
- [OAUTH-WG] review draft-ietf-oauth-native-apps-07 Sebastian.Ebling