Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6749 (3880)

Eriksen Costa <eriksencosta@gmail.com> Tue, 04 February 2014 19:02 UTC

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Could we make Mishra's suggestion simpler? Example:

For public clients using implicit flows, this specification does not
provide any method for the client to determine that an access token was
issued to its current instance.

I'm not sure if it is explicit enough, neither convinced about "instance"
(maybe "session"?) but it seems more in line with the rest of the
specification's wording.

Thank you for the clarification,
Eriksen


On Tue, Feb 4, 2014 at 4:56 PM, Bill Mills <wmills_92105@yahoo.com> wrote:

> Agreed.
>
>
>   On Tuesday, February 4, 2014 8:17 AM, Dick Hardt <dick.hardt@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>  This change is appropriate and reflects the intent of the statement.
>
>
> On Tue, Feb 4, 2014 at 8:13 AM, RFC Errata System <
> rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6749,
> "The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6749&eid=3880
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Technical
> Reported by: Eriksen Costa <eriksencosta@gmail.com>
>
> Section: 10.16
>
> Original Text
> -------------
> For public clients using implicit flows, this specification does not
> provide any method for the client to determine what client an access
> token was issued to.
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> For public clients using implicit flows, this specification does not
> provide any method for the authorization server to determine what
> client an access token was issued to.
>
> Notes
> -----
> A client can only know about tokens issued to it and not for other clients.
>
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC6749 (draft-ietf-oauth-v2-31)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework
> Publication Date    : October 2012
> Author(s)           : D. Hardt, Ed.
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Web Authorization Protocol
> Area                : Security
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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