Re: [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-kitten-sasl-oauth-18
Bill Mills <wmills_92105@yahoo.com> Fri, 02 January 2015 23:46 UTC
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From: Bill Mills <wmills_92105@yahoo.com>
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-kitten-sasl-oauth-18
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3 items fixed, thank you On Friday, January 2, 2015 7:01 AM, "Ebling, Sebastian" <s.ebling@telekom.de> wrote: Hello, There is a little typo in Section 3.2.2: Replace "The URL for for a document" with "The URL for a document". Section 3. contains "2. Server responds with a successful authentication. In the case where authorization fails the server sends an error result, then client MUST then send an additional message to the server in order to allow the server to finish the exchange." There is a switch between authentication and authorization. Even if the access token represents authorization information I suggest to write "In the case where authentication fails" because it is more consistent here. Section 3.2.2. introduces "oauth-configuration", the example in section 4.3 uses "openid-configuration". Regards Sebastian Ebling Von: OAuth [mailto:oauth-bounces@ietf.org] Im Auftrag von Bill Mills Gesendet: Montag, 29. Dezember 2014 18:46 An: oauth@ietf.org Betreff: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-kitten-sasl-oauth-18 No other comments on this? Any "It's ready to go."? On Monday, December 15, 2014 9:34 AM, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> wrote: Hi all, There may be some interested parties over here; please feel free to chime in on this WGLC over on the kitten list. -Ben ---------- Forwarded message ---------- Date: Mon, 15 Dec 2014 12:14:30 -0500 From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> To: kitten@ietf.org Cc: kitten-chairs@tools.ietf.org Subject: [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-kitten-sasl-oauth-18 This message begins the fourth Working Group Last Call (WGLC) of "A set of SASL Mechanisms for OAuth" <draft-ietf-kitten-sasl-oauth-18.txt>. Due to the overlap of the last call period with holidays, the duration of the WGLC is extended to four weeks, so the WGLC will end on 12 January 2015. The draft is available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-kitten-sasl-oauth-18 Because the changes between -15 and -18 involve behavior changes, including changes regarding discovery and dynamic registration, the Chairs decided to issue an additional last call. Please review the document and send comments to the Working Group mailing list < kitten at itef.org > or the co-chairs < kitten-chairs at tools.ietf.org > before the end of the WGLC. Any and all comments on the document are sought in order to access the strength of consensus. Even if you have read and commented on this or earlier versions of the draft, please feel free to comment again. This is particularly important if you found issues with the previous version. As a reminder, comments can be anything from "this looks fine" to "this is a horrible idea"; they can include suggestions for minor editorial corrections to significant editorial changes. - Your Kitten Chairs _______________________________________________ Kitten mailing list Kitten@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/kitten _______________________________________________ OAuth mailing list OAuth@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth
- [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-kitte… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-k… Bill Mills
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-kitten… Richer, Justin P.
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-k… Jamie Nicolson (倪志明)
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-k… Torsten Lodderstedt
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-k… John Bradley
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-k… Bill Mills
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-k… Ebling, Sebastian
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: [kitten] WGLC of draft-ietf-k… Bill Mills