Re: [OAUTH-WG] RAR WGLC editorial feedback

Torsten Lodderstedt <torsten@lodderstedt.net> Sun, 20 June 2021 09:44 UTC

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Thanks Brian. Review and approved.

> Am 17.06.2021 um 21:27 schrieb Brian Campbell <bcampbell=40pingidentity.com@dmarc.ietf.org>:
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> In a PR to try and make it easy https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-oauth-rar/pull/74/files#diff-cbb16c6731a89f7daa2f8f1963f5c005633f4273846af12926d187292cb3a66b <https://www.google.com/url?q=https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-oauth-rar/pull/74/files%23diff-cbb16c6731a89f7daa2f8f1963f5c005633f4273846af12926d187292cb3a66b&source=gmail-imap&ust=1624562884000000&usg=AOvVaw1T3bp40OBrllpDKHPI7o03> 
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