Re: [OAUTH-WG] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Tue, 03 September 2019 19:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05: (with COMMENT)
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>> AH.  I read later in the document and figured out my problem: I think it would
>> help if you hyphenate "audience-restrict" (and "audience-restricted" later).
>> No?
>
> Yes? Short of Adam Roach stepping in here to teach me more about proper use of hyphens [1], I
> think that would be helpful and will make the changes.

:-)

This is a really tricky one, hyphenwise, and I'm not sure.  What I
*am* sure about is that if it were hyphenated I would not have had a
problem reading it.  Thanks for the quick response!

Barry