[OAUTH-WG] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-10: (with COMMENT)

"Barry Leiba" <barryleiba@computer.org> Mon, 22 June 2015 21:52 UTC

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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-10: (with COMMENT)
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Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-10: No Objection

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Thanks for addressing my DISCUSS and most of my comments.  The important
comment that still remains is this:

-- Section 3.1 --
I'd REALLY like to see us stop trying to tell IANA how to handle review
by designated experts.  This should be re-cast as instructions to the DE
(to make sure that the mailing list is consulted), and IANA should be
left to handle the expert review with their existing process, which works
fine.

While we're at it, it would be nice to have some further instruction to
the DEs about what they should be looking at when deciding whether to
approve a request.  There's some very minimal instruction under "name" in
the template, but that's all.  Is there nothing more to say?

For the spop document, I suggested the text change below.  Something
similar for this document would be great:

For the spop document, not this one!:
OLD
<most of Section 6.2>

NEW
   Additional code_challenge_method types for use with the authorization
   endpoint are registered using the Specification Required policy
   [RFC5226], which includes review of the request by one or more
   Designated Experts.  The DEs will ensure there is at least a two-week
   review of the request on the oauth-ext-review@ietf.org mailing list,
   and that any discussion on that list converges before they respond to
   the request.  To allow for the allocation of values prior to
   publication, the Designated Expert(s) may approve registration once
   they are satisfied that an acceptable specification will be
published.

   Discussion on the oauth-ext-review@ietf.org mailing list should use
   an appropriate subject, such as "Request for PKCE
   code_challenge_method: example").

   The Designated Expert(s) should consider the discussion on the
   mailing list, as well as <<these other things>> when evaluating
   registration requests.  Denials should include an explanation
   and, if applicable, suggestions as to how to make the request
   successful.
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