[OAUTH-WG] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-32: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-32: (with COMMENT)
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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-32: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for the work put into this document. Not too many differences since my review on the -26 (hence I reviewed mainly the diff). Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be appreciated). I hope that this helps to improve the document, Regards, -éric == COMMENTS == -- Section 1 -- Is it normal that the abstract has a) and b) while the introduction has a), b), and c) ? -- Section 5.2 -- I see that "Many phones in the market as of this writing" is still in the text... Does this assertion still hold in 2021 ? Is it backed by some references ?
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- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draf… Eric Vyncke (evyncke)