Re: [OAUTH-WG] WGLC on Pushed Authorization Requests draft

Thanks for the review, Karsten. We'll incorporate your suggestions into the
next revision of the draft.

On Wed, Aug 19, 2020 at 3:41 AM Karsten Meyer zu Selhausen <
karsten.meyerzuselhausen@hackmanit.de> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> I have two very small suggestions which I also raised as issues on Github:
>
>    1. There are no hints in front of example requests/responses if extra
>    line breaks are used for display purposes. I think hints such as "(with
>    extra line breaks for display purposes only)" should be added to the
>    examples. (#64
>    <https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-oauth-par/issues/64>)
>    2. In section 3 there is a typo in step 2. I think it should be "*Validate
>    *the request object signature as specified in JAR
>    [I-D.ietf-oauth-jwsreq], section 6.2." instead of "*Validates *the
>    ...". The imperative is used in step 1, as well. (#65
>    <https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-oauth-par/issues/65>)
>
> Best regards;
> Karsten
> On 12.08.2020 00:07, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef wrote:
>
> All,
>
> This is a WGLC on the *Pushed Authorization Requests *document:
> https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-oauth-par-03.html
>
> Please, take a look and provide feedback on the list by *August 25th.*
>
> Regards,
>  Rifaat & Hannes
>
>
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