[OAUTH-WG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05

Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 30 July 2019 17:34 UTC

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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2019-07-30
IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-05
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A well written document ready for publication.  It has one very minor
nit that needs to be addressed at some point.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:  JWT is not in the well known list and does not seem
to be expanded on first use,