[OAUTH-WG] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-iss-auth-resp-03: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-iss-auth-resp-03: (with COMMENT)
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Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-oauth-iss-auth-resp-03: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/blog/handling-iesg-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-iss-auth-resp/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you did with these suggestions. Section 2.3. , paragraph 2, nit: > s by any other mechanism which is outside of the scope of this specification. > ^^^^^^^^^^ This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside". Section 4. , paragraph 4, nit: > f alternative countermeasures are outside of the scope of this specification. > ^^^^^^^^^^ This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside". These URLs in the document can probably be converted to HTTPS: * http://arxiv.org/abs/1508.04324 * http://www.iana.org/assignments/oauth-parameters * http://openid.net/specs/openid-connect-core-1_0.html
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