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Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6749 (6613)

Justin Richer <jricher@mit.edu> Fri, 25 June 2021 15:39 UTC

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From: Justin Richer <jricher@mit.edu>
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6749 (6613)
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I personally agree with this report, the new proposed wording is better.

OAuth 2.1 editors, please take note!

 — Justin

> On Jun 22, 2021, at 8:01 PM, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote:
> 
> This looks correct to me; could the authors/WG please confirm?
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Ben
> 
> On Thu, Jun 17, 2021 at 12:04:37PM -0700, RFC Errata System wrote:
>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6749,
>> "The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework".
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> You may review the report below and at:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6613
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> Type: Editorial
>> Reported by: Daniel Barclay <danielbarclay.oss@gmail.com>
>> 
>> Section: 3.3
>> 
>> Original Text
>> -------------
>> The value of the scope parameter is expressed as a list of space-delimited, case-sensitive strings
>> 
>> Corrected Text
>> --------------
>> The value of the scope parameter is expressed as a space-delimited list of case-sensitive strings
>> 
>> Notes
>> -----
>> The original/current seems to be a bit confusing.
>> 
>> The value is not a collection of space-delimited strings (whatever a "space-delimited string" would be), but it a space-delimited (representation of) a collection of strings.
>> 
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>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC6749 (draft-ietf-oauth-v2-31)
>> --------------------------------------
>> Title               : The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework
>> Publication Date    : October 2012
>> Author(s)           : D. Hardt, Ed.
>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>> Source              : Web Authorization Protocol
>> Area                : Security
>> Stream              : IETF
>> Verifying Party     : IESG
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