[OAUTH-WG] Missing characters in draft-ietf-oauth-v2-23

André DeMarre <andredemarre@gmail.com> Wed, 25 January 2012 02:10 UTC

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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] Missing characters in draft-ietf-oauth-v2-23
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Revision 23 of draft-ietf-oauth seems to be the victim of some form of
sloppy character conversion; perhaps a conversion to ASCII without
character transliteration. Some apostrophes have been removed and some
names were changed in the acknowledgments.

Here are the errors I could find while comparing revs 22 and 23:

Section 1
"the end-user's password" became "the end-user s password"

Section 12
"Bill de hOra" became "Bill de h ra"
"Andre DeMarre" became "Andr DeMarre"
"Christian Stuebner" became "Christian St bner"

Appendix A
"one of OAuth's most" became "one of OAuth s most"

Regards,
Andre DeMarre