Re: [OAUTH-WG] Review Comments for draft-ietf-oauth-proof-of-possession-02

Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com> Thu, 20 August 2015 00:41 UTC

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Privacy Consideration
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It is missing privacy consideration. It is not required per se, but since Key Confirmation method with ephemeral key can be less privacy intrusive compared to other sender confirmation method so adding some text around it may be a good idea.

Can you supply some specific proposed text for -04?

When do you expect -04?
Depending on it, I may be able to.

I expect to work on this on my Friday morning – 1.5 days from now.

                                                                Best wishes,
                                                                -- Mike