Re: [OAUTH-WG] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-26: (with COMMENT)
Nat Sakimura <sakimura@gmail.com> Thu, 13 August 2020 15:15 UTC
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From: Nat Sakimura <sakimura@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 14 Aug 2020 00:15:19 +0900
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-26: (with COMMENT)
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You are welcome. Actually, for 5.2, I should probably replace with more modern examples instead of old phones and old Internet Explorer. E.g., a) a mobile app making an authorization request through a mobile browser; b) RAR. On Thu, Aug 13, 2020 at 10:44 PM Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke@cisco.com> wrote: > Than you Nat for the quick reply and the fixes > > > > Regards > > > > -éric > > > > *From: *Nat Sakimura <sakimura@gmail.com> > *Date: *Thursday, 13 August 2020 at 15:43 > *To: *Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com> > *Cc: *The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, oauth <oauth@ietf.org>, " > oauth-chairs@ietf.org" <oauth-chairs@ietf.org>, " > draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq@ietf.org> > *Subject: *Re: [OAUTH-WG] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on > draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-26: (with COMMENT) > > > > Thanks, Éric. > > > > Reply inline: > > > > On Wed, Aug 5, 2020 at 5:47 PM Éric Vyncke via Datatracker < > noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > > Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-26: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thank you for the work put into this document. > > Please find below a couple of non-blocking COMMENTs. > > I hope that this helps to improve the document, > > Regards, > > -éric > > == COMMENTS == > Should the document shepherd's write-up be updated ? It is dated October > 2016... about 4 years ago. > > -- Section 5.2 -- > Based on the long history of this document, is the following statement > "Many > phones in the market as of this writing still" still valid ? > > > > Yes, partly because the demand for the authorization request payload is > becoming large these days. > > As we can see in the PAR draft, we are precipitating to request_uri > pattern. > > > > > -- Section 5.2.1 -- > Suggest to give a hint about the use of tfp.example.org (TFP is expanded > only > in section 10.2). > > > > You are right. Perhaps it may be better to give two examples, one with TFP > with one-liner explanation and another with URN that is being stored at the > authorization server. > > > > > == NITS == > > Please check the ID-NITS at > > https://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-26.txt > > > > Thanks. Will do. > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > OAuth mailing list > OAuth@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth > > > > > -- > > Nat Sakimura (=nat) > > Chairman, OpenID Foundation > http://nat.sakimura.org/ > @_nat_en > -- Nat Sakimura (=nat) Chairman, OpenID Foundation http://nat.sakimura.org/ @_nat_en
- [OAUTH-WG] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ie… Éric Vyncke via Datatracker
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draf… Nat Sakimura
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draf… Eric Vyncke (evyncke)
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draf… Nat Sakimura