Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05

Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com> Wed, 04 September 2019 14:50 UTC

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From: Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com>
Date: Wed, 4 Sep 2019 08:49:49 -0600
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To: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05
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Thanks Alissa!

On Wed, Sep 4, 2019 at 8:36 AM Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>; wrote:

> Stewart, thanks for your review. Brian, thanks for the fix. I’ve entered a
> No Objection ballot.
>
> Regards,
> Alissa
>
> On Aug 13, 2019, at 2:43 PM, Brian Campbell <
> bcampbell=40pingidentity.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; wrote:
>
> Thanks for the review Stewart and my apologies for the slow response - I
> left on a longish summer family vacation the day before the review email
> hit my inbox.
>
> I've fixed the nit by using "JSON Web Token (JWT)" on that first use in
> the source controlled editor's xml version and it'll show up in the next
> draft revision.
>
>
> On Tue, Jul 30, 2019 at 11:35 AM Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <
> noreply@ietf.org>; wrote:
>
>> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
>> Review result: Ready
>>
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
>> like any other last call comments.
>>
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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>> Document: draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05
>> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
>> Review Date: 2019-07-30
>> IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-05
>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>>
>> Summary: A well written document ready for publication.  It has one very
>> minor
>> nit that needs to be addressed at some point.
>>
>> Major issues: None
>>
>> Minor issues: None
>>
>> Nits/editorial comments:  JWT is not in the well known list and does not
>> seem
>> to be expanded on first use,
>>
>>
>>
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