Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-access-token-jwt-11

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Tue, 06 April 2021 12:48 UTC

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Roni, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On 2021-2-7, at 11:28, Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-oauth-access-token-jwt-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2021-02-07
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-09
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nit
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> In section 3 the get example has client_id as s6BhdRkqt3 and the claims has s6BhdRkqt3_
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