Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 04 September 2019 14:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05
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Stewart, thanks for your review. Brian, thanks for the fix. I’ve entered a No Objection ballot.

Regards,
Alissa

> On Aug 13, 2019, at 2:43 PM, Brian Campbell <bcampbell=40pingidentity.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; wrote:
> 
> Thanks for the review Stewart and my apologies for the slow response - I left on a longish summer family vacation the day before the review email hit my inbox.
> 
> I've fixed the nit by using "JSON Web Token (JWT)" on that first use in the source controlled editor's xml version and it'll show up in the next draft revision.
>   
> 
> On Tue, Jul 30, 2019 at 11:35 AM Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review Date: 2019-07-30
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-05
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: A well written document ready for publication.  It has one very minor
> nit that needs to be addressed at some point.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:  JWT is not in the well known list and does not seem
> to be expanded on first use,
> 
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