[OAUTH-WG] Nit in section 4 of draft 13 of SD-JWT

Travis Spencer <travis@curity.io> Thu, 24 October 2024 07:53 UTC

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Section 4 of draft 13 of the SD-JWT WG document says:

As an alternative illustration of the SD-JWT format, for those who celebrate,
ABNF [RFC5234] for the SD-JWT, SD-JWT+KB, and various constituent parts
is provided here:

Who are those who celebrate? Those that celebrate birthdays,
Midsummer, Halloween? I don't understand and think that phrase should
be deleted.

Suggested alternative:

As an alternative illustration of the SD-JWT format in ABNF [RFC5234] for
the SD-JWT, SD-JWT+KB, and various constituent parts is provided here:

HTH!