Re: [OAUTH-WG] Nit: Language in section 1.1
Justin Richer <jricher@mitre.org> Wed, 14 September 2011 13:03 UTC
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Nit: Language in section 1.1
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+1, this wording is much clearer to me, too -- justin On Tue, 2011-09-13 at 19:25 -0400, Greg Brail wrote: > This part of section 1.1 is confusing to me and I stumble whenever I > read it – I see that Brian Eaton suggested looking at it a while back > but I don’t think it got changed: > > > > “OAuth includes four roles working together to grant and provide > > access to protected resources - access restricted resources > requiring > > authentication:” > > > > I would suggest something simpler, such as: > > > > “OAuth includes four roles that work together to grant and provide > access to protected resources that require authentication.” > > > > > > Gregory Brail | Technology | Apigee | +1-650-937-9302 > > > >
- [OAUTH-WG] Nit: Language in section 1.1 Greg Brail
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Nit: Language in section 1.1 Justin Richer
- Re: [OAUTH-WG] Nit: Language in section 1.1 Eran Hammer-Lahav