Re: [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01.txt

Takahiko Kawasaki <daru.tk@gmail.com> Thu, 15 June 2017 18:18 UTC

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From: Takahiko Kawasaki <daru.tk@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 16 Jun 2017 03:18:48 +0900
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01.txt
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Dear Brian,

Thank you for having fixed it.

I don't think my name should be listed in the document just for this,
though. It's too unbalanced considering others' contribution...

Best,
Taka


2017-06-12 20:57 GMT+09:00 Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com>;:

> Thanks Takahiko, mentioning it on the list is enough. I've fixed it in
> the editors' draft https://github.com/ietf-oauth-mtls/i-d/commit/
> c6725e30dd1dc2f77aa293bce7fd1849713ed406
>
> On Mon, Jun 12, 2017 at 5:33 AM, Takahiko Kawasaki <daru.tk@gmail.com>;
> wrote:
>
>> Hello,
>>
>> I'm sorry for this FAQ but where can I make comments for the draft of
>> "Mutual TLS Profiles for OAuth Clients"?
>>
>> I found a trivial editorial issue in the last paragraph in "3. Mutual TLS
>> Sender Constrained Resources Access". The second 'that' in "... verify that
>> the that certificate matches ..." should be removed (= that part should be
>> "... verify that the certificate matches ..."). Is it enough to mention it
>> in this mailing list like this?
>>
>> Best Regards,
>> Takahiko Kawasaki
>>
>> 2017-05-27 5:34 GMT+09:00 Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com>;:
>>
>>> A new draft of "Mutual TLS Profiles for OAuth Clients" has been published. The changes from the previous version are summarized below.
>>>
>>>
>>>    draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01>
>>>
>>>    o  Added more explicit details of using RFC 7662 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7662> token introspection
>>>       with mutual TLS sender constrained access tokens.
>>>    o  Added an IANA OAuth Token Introspection Response Registration
>>>       request for "cnf".
>>>    o  Specify that tls_client_auth_subject_dn and
>>>       tls_client_auth_root_dn are RFC 4514 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc4514> String Representation of
>>>       Distinguished Names.
>>>    o  Changed tls_client_auth_issuer_dn to tls_client_auth_root_dn.
>>>    o  Changed the text in the Section 3 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01#section-3> to not be specific about using a
>>>       hash of the cert.
>>>    o  Changed the abbreviated title to 'OAuth Mutual TLS' (previously
>>>       was the acronym MTLSPOC).
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>>> From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>;
>>> Date: Fri, May 26, 2017 at 2:26 PM
>>> Subject: [OAUTH-WG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01.txt
>>> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
>>> Cc: oauth@ietf.org
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>> directories.
>>> This draft is a work item of the Web Authorization Protocol of the IETF.
>>>
>>>         Title           : Mutual TLS Profiles for OAuth Clients
>>>         Authors         : Brian Campbell
>>>                           John Bradley
>>>                           Nat Sakimura
>>>                           Torsten Lodderstedt
>>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01.txt
>>>         Pages           : 12
>>>         Date            : 2017-05-26
>>>
>>> Abstract:
>>>    This document describes Transport Layer Security (TLS) mutual
>>>    authentication using X.509 certificates as a mechanism for both OAuth
>>>    client authentication to the token endpoint as well as for sender
>>>    constrained access to OAuth protected resources.
>>>
>>>
>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls/
>>>
>>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01
>>>
>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01
>>>
>>>
>>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>>> submission
>>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>>
>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>>
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>>
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