[OAUTH-WG] -08 nit
Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com> Wed, 16 June 2010 14:39 UTC
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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] -08 nit
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Noticed some awkward wording on page 6 - the last sentence of step (a) describing the authorization request, "When cannot be avoided, the client interacts ..."
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