Re: [Ohai] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-ohai-ohttp

I read this finally (I know late, but what else is new), and there are some
Nits that need checking out (Lucas caught most of them I think).
Whomever shepherds this will follow up on those.

Thinking about the IESG process, you may want to quote things like "
KeyConfig.key.id" to make them more obvious. Having run through several
reviews as
shepherd for DNS docs things like this stick in my mind.

tim

On Tue, Aug 16, 2022 at 2:33 PM Eric Orth <ericorth=
40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> Took a review pass of the latest draft 03.  Opened one minor editorial
> issue in the github.  I also found my eyes glazing over when trying to read
> through and understand the section on HPKE encapsulation, but assuming
> davidben@google.com has reviewed that text, I trust his judgement on such
> stuff.
>
> Overall, I support this moving forward.
>
> On Tue, Aug 16, 2022 at 12:40 PM Tommy Pauly <tpauly=
> 40apple.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>
>> I’ve done a review pass of the document, based on the current editor’s
>> copy in GitHub. I think it’s in good shape and should be published.
>>
>> I did file a PR for minor comments, mainly editorial:
>>
>> https://github.com/ietf-wg-ohai/oblivious-http/pull/183
>>
>> The interesting bits here are:
>> - The suggested info string for other media types needs to be updated to
>> include the header values
>> - I think several places in the document would benefit from referring to
>> the “repurposing” support, so that readers are aware of the places they
>> should make generic for different media types if they intend to support
>> them. It’s useful when implementing the API surface.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Tommy
>>
>> On Aug 8, 2022, at 2:57 PM, Shivan Kaul Sahib <shivankaulsahib@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>> ohai folks,
>>
>> This email starts a Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-ohai-ohttp, "Oblivious
>> HTTP".
>>
>> The draft is available at
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ohai-ohttp/, with the source
>> at https://github.com/ietf-wg-ohai/oblivious-http.
>>
>> The WGLC will last for a period of 3 weeks until August 22, 2022, 23:59
>> AoE <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anywhere_on_Earth>.
>>
>> Please review and submit issues and pull requests and comments and
>> objections and support to GitHub and/or this mailing list.
>>
>> Thanks!
>> Shivan & Richard, OHAI chairs
>>
>>
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