Re: [openpgp] Lars Eggert's No Objection on charter-ietf-openpgp-03-03: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Fri, 15 December 2023 19:01 UTC

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Subject: Re: [openpgp] Lars Eggert's No Objection on charter-ietf-openpgp-03-03: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Lars!

Thanks for the review.

> -----Original Message-----
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> Subject: Lars Eggert's No Objection on charter-ietf-openpgp-03-03: (with
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> COMMENT:
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> # GEN AD review of charter-ietf-openpgp-03-03
> 
> CC @larseggert
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> ## Comments
> 
> There is no need to use Markdown links for I-Ds and RFC in the charter text, the
> Datatracker will add those automatically.

Good point.  Links have been removed in -03-04.

> ## Nits
> 
> All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose
> to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
> automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool) so there
> will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
> did with these suggestions.
> 
> ### Typos
> 
> #### Section 3156, paragraph 3
> ```
> - tackling anther topic.
> + tackling another topic.
> +            +
> ```

Fixed.

Thanks,
Roman