[openpgp] Lars Eggert's No Objection on charter-ietf-openpgp-03-03: (with COMMENT)

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Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-openpgp-03-03: No Objection

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# GEN AD review of charter-ietf-openpgp-03-03

CC @larseggert

## Comments

There is no need to use Markdown links for I-Ds and RFC in
the charter text, the Datatracker will add those automatically.

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### Typos

#### Section 3156, paragraph 3
```
- tackling anther topic.
+ tackling another topic.
+            +
```

## Notes

This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the
[`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT].

[ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md
[ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
[IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool