[openpgp] Re: Call for adoption of draft-gallagher-openpgp-replacementkey

[Falko Strenzke <[e-mail]>]

I read the new draft version of replacement keys. I think the document 
has significantly improved and naturally I still would appreciate its 
adoption.

A few minor comments:

Sec. 3.
- 2nd paragraph:
   - "direct signature" -> "direct key signature" (throughout the document)
   - "Replacement Key" in the text should be lower case in my view. This 
is for instance how the crypto-refresh handles normative terms. 
(throughout the document)
- 3rd paragraph:
   -  `The "no replacement" bit SHOULD be used instead.` Better 
formulate the whole paragraph in a positive sense, i.e., starting with. 
"In order to signal that for a given key there is no replacement ..." 
and then also state that the absence of the subpacket does not imply any 
statement in this respect.

"4.2 Graph topology"-> capitalize heading

- Falko

I have some further comments which I post in the same thread but in 
response to the relevant discussion.

Am 02.07.24 um 19:26 schrieb Andrew Gallagher:
> Hi, all.
>
> I have just published a new version of the Replacement Key Mechanism draft:
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-gallagher-openpgp-replacementkey/02/
>
> This includes the updates mentioned earlier in the thread.
>
> Thanks,
> A
>
>> On 2 Jul 2024, at 17:59, Stephen Farrell<[e-mail]>  wrote:
>>
>> Signed PGP part
>>
>> Hiya,
>>
>> On 02/07/2024 17:25, Simon Josefsson wrote:
>>> Hi.  I still believe a clear problem statements (i.e., What actual practical problem does this aim to solve?) is lacking from the document,> but take that as my feedback on how to improve the
>>> document rather than as a blocking position.
>> Thanks Simon. I figure that means we're likely to adopt
>> the update Andrew plans to publish shortly, once people
>> have had a chance to look at that. So Andrew if you can
>> shoot that out then we can give the WG a week to read it
>> and all going well adopt it then.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> S.
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>
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