Re: [openpgp] John Scudder's No Objection on charter-ietf-openpgp-03-00: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Mon, 04 December 2023 18:05 UTC

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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
To: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [openpgp] John Scudder's No Objection on charter-ietf-openpgp-03-00: (with COMMENT)
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Hi John!

Thanks for the review.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: openpgp <openpgp-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of John Scudder via
> Datatracker
> Sent: Wednesday, November 29, 2023 1:28 PM
> To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Cc: openpgp-chairs@ietf.org; openpgp@ietf.org
> Subject: [openpgp] John Scudder's No Objection on charter-ietf-openpgp-03-00:
> (with COMMENT)
> 
> John Scudder has entered the following ballot position for
> charter-ietf-openpgp-03-00: No Objection
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> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
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> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
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> 
> Overall this looks great. I have a couple very small editorial issues you may
> want to address.
> 
> - I think all the uses of quotation marks other than the final two quoted things
> ("Completion" and "parked WG document") are spurious. I realize this is an
> exceedingly minor point, but it's a pet peeve.
> 
> - I suggest
> 
> OLD:
> For all work items will required demonstration
> 
> NEW:
> All work items will require demonstration

Both changes made.

Roman